This is my alternative to myspace because myspace is pretty overrated and I would rather be listening to music. =P. But the main reason is because Dez wanted me to get one ;D.
\"They were looking at me with these silly looks on their doggy faces. Their tails were still and their eyes looked sad. I grinned, they were just dogs\"
This is just a suggestion; but I think you should take out the word \"doggy\" so the readers don\'t find out til \"their tails\" err something. I don\'t know, i suck at \"correcting\" anything. But really, the story is good. You have a reallll good shot at winning this contest((: mmhm.
gregxgore
That sounds like fun. I need a new bed. =/
posted Dec 24
gregxgore
My dad\'s, unfortunately lol. :[ Where\'re you?!
posted Dec 24
dlkfjz desirae
\"They were looking at me with these silly looks on
their doggy faces. Their tails were still and their
eyes looked sad. I grinned, they were just dogs\" This
is just a suggestion; but I think you should take out
the word \"doggy\" so the readers don\'t find out til
\"their tails\" err something. I don\'t know, i suck at
\"correcting\" anything. But really, the story is good.
You have a reallll good shot at winning this contest((:
mmhm.
posted Dec 24
dlkfjz desirae
I will, there\'s really like no mistakes at all. but
i\'m reading it still ((:
posted Dec 24
gregxgore
Nothing, really. Just chillin,\' tryin\' to make it
through today, I go home tomorrow. :]]]
posted Dec 24
gregxgore
Hey! :]]]
posted Dec 24
dlkfjz desirae
((: so do i. i\'m fucking coldddd ahh. dude, dude,
dude, your story is like really good. i\'m still
reading ittt. hold on.
posted Dec 24
dlkfjz desirae
(((: yeah, when i\'m UNgrounded we\'ll hang out and
it\'ll be nice, and fun. aha. i saw P.S. I love you, it
was a cute moviee.
posted Dec 23