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KLINNZEELOVERLY
hey. im kaylynn... or as my brother peter calls me....klinnnn. I'm 17 and im a senior at hickman high school... in columbia, mo. im sooo ready to be done with high school.I LOVE JESUS WITH ALL MY HEART!
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the Rain
the sound of Rain bouncing off the rooftops gliding down alone only to fall and gather on the cold hard ground to the touch Rain drops they are cold, wet they can be unforgiving with the slightest suspicion they become razor sharp the Rain makes me feel like im in a far off paradise watching reality, but not living it seeing everyhting,... like it's a dream gives the illusion that time stands still and all that is important is the safety of each and every drop to the pool in which it belongs the Rain it gives knowledge that times change and days wither away until nothing is left but a puddle to walk in the Rain is the liberation i need the scene that sets me free i then know it is only the beginning and i get another chance to make a new end the Rain
Tonight, HE made the mistake. (a poem by me.. )
my teeth chatter, my stomach churns the earth quakes beneath my well-worn shoes a figure briskly passes, his familiar scent: aftershave, car greese, dirt SLAM goes the front door, the v8 revved up in his Cobra could be heard a mile away he believed a lie his boys had told, A lie that i was with someone else. I told him no. his angry eyes fierry with rage. I turn to the others in room gazes of horror on their bronzeed faces. i reach to my aching head and feel wetness warm crimson seeps onto my hands, i drop to my knees Astonished that he struck me. Eyes go astray around me, trying their best not to make a scene. I search for a friendly face... they were all with him. don't let her leave. The bodies around me begin to hover, assessing the situation. murmured amongst themselves. perhaps louder than a murmur. my head reeled with pain, it was impossible to hear them where was he, why did he leave me here... with them. a wince noted there was blood in my mouth. i never saw him hit me, or at least i don't remember. i didn't understand his reaction, but i knew what had happened. slipping further to the ground a last immeasurable blow. Gasps. were they now responsible for this broken girl, they had let drop on the hardwood floor?
Will i find him?
I feel elusiveness all around me. my floorboards are caving in. i'm not sure where my hope has gone, and i think i'm going to give in. I feel it coming, a wave of relief. I can taste atonement in the air. nothing seems to get as close to me.. it doesnt seem fair. i want to feel loved again. a true love, nothing unjust. i need to be wanted, i need to be found. no one steps up. so i sit,alone, day after day. i wait, i am patient. but patience grows thin, with wear and tear. i believe there is someone waiting for me as well. i know it may seem naive. but if that thought is what keeps me going i will keep it for my own. until the day comes when he finds me, and i am no longer alone. the thoughts, the dreams, a mixture of what has happened and what is to come. my eyes are lonely, for they seek and find no one. no one that wants what they want, no one that seeks what they seek, no perfect match. yet, i dont lose hope. hope is what drives the heart to seek. for when it becomes broken, hope is how i find the words to speak.
Joe
Yo what's up! My name is Joe! I sing in a band
called Camisado. You should check out my band
at www.myspace.com/camisadorock
or www.purevolume.com/camisadorock -Joe
posted Apr 29
dEE-dUbblEw-EllE
wat kind of trips do u go on and where all have u
gone???
posted Apr 10
dEE-dUbblEw-EllE
well ur most welcome. but thats would grabbed me so
much from that piece, bcuz u dont expect that to
happen. i thought it was just goin to be another love
one. but it really pulls u into reality and shows u the
otherside of stuff like that. as much as i hate to
think about that bcuz its effed up, ur right it does
happen all to much, i wish there was more to do about
it too.
posted Apr 08
dEE-dUbblEw-EllE
i hear u. well even though its just for u i like it, u
write extremely well. i havent read stuff as good as
urs in awhile. but hey if u ever have something that u
wont ppl to read send to me. i would be more than happy
to read it. but as far as wat u have up i like
"tonight.." the most. i hate the subject matter but its
amazingly written and extremely powerful and
suspenceful.
posted Apr 08
dEE-dUbblEw-EllE
decent. so how often do u write??
posted Apr 07
dEE-dUbblEw-EllE
umm thats hard. i would say 3oh!3, devil wears prada,
as i lay dying,rammstien and august burns red
posted Apr 07
dEE-dUbblEw-EllE
thanx for the add. hows it goin??
posted Apr 02
Kucho
hi ^^
posted Mar 05