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Description is tough to write. Many writers neglect to add character descriptions to the narrative in order to enrich their scenes. Some writers add too much description with long, wordy blocks of exposition. These types of descriptive info-dumps are also called core dumps, expository lumps, and death to the reader.



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Now this is a "better" example of how to lace in description with dialogue and action. Hopefully, a bit more showing and I tried to include a few of the 5 senses.

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Posted Apr 19, 2016 at 10:15am

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