DISCOORDINATED

 

Age:  27

Location:  Maryland

Joined On:  Aug 29, 2006

Occupation:  musician, artist, writer

Website:  www.discoordinated.blogspot....

 
 

steefy

Sweet Georgia

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Coheed and Cambria Coheed and Cambria

Rock / Progressive / Alternative

anathallo anathallo

Indie / Progressive / Folk

Standing Small Standing Small

Acoustic / Christian / Rock

Get Cape. Wear Cape. Fly Get Cape. Wear Cape. Fly

Experimental / Acoustic / Electronica

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I am Ryan. I play by myself sometimes, sometimes I sing for Anapra

 
 
September 13

a pain-hope career (part 1)

A pain-hope career (part 1)

A clanging foreign noise
drifts ricocheting to his ears
off walls and alley ways.

He, caught in mid breath
to discern the sound,
stops to peer through chain links.

Eyes coming buildings
just past the barbed wire.
"That district is a slum."

A collar of white leash,
forbids him to walk
on that side of the barrier.

...seconds pass
His thumb slips a top button
as his feet creep into the ghetto

The noise leads past
buildings lined with corrosion,
aged, dying municipal blocks.

The repeating steal chime
pulls him in on wary feet
through the arteries of a forsaken city.

unresting curiosity pushing him
to find a source, or a reason
for an alarm in a dead place.

FIN (Part 1)

This is my first entry on a series I am doing called "A pain-hope career". All the poems in this series will tell one story. So sorry to leave you hanging. I wrote Part 1 over nine times (not including revisions of those 9 drafts) to get it to this point. I hope you guys like it.

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