PureVolume

my poem

Posted May 21, 2009

hi i love writing poems,and one that im proud of is called unbearable heartache.here it is:

if this is living, i dont feel alive.everytime i see your photo,my body freezes with depression and sorrow.

when you died,i felt as if i died too.everyday my happy memories of you never melt away.i'm suffocating from my loss of you.

now your gone life seems darker,dull and colourless.you were the light of my life,my heart and soul.

it seams pointless living if you cant be in my life.you were my life.the person who would make me laugh and feel happy,but your death caused me such heartache.so unbearable,it felt like dying.

every night i look at the stars and see your face in them,like a pernament constellation in the night sky,that will never fade.

sometimes i wish i could crawl in a coffin,shut the lid,close my eyes,and never open them again.

if i could rewind time,i would go back to the days we had fun together,just to be with you.

now i know what its like to lose someone you love,and feel the unbearable heartache,that will always remain in my soul.

well please comment me to tell me what you think of it,and how it made you feel.