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The Revenge of Anduinor Chapter 3
Chapter3 Anduinor arose early and peered outside the cave door. All was still and the air held a heay fog. The ground was soaked with dew. Anduinor felt the pangs of hunger. He looked around outside for some wild mushrooms or some edibble plant. He found nothing. He found a small stream and began looking for fish. He once again cought sight of his scarred face in the waters cruel mirror. He starred for a long time at his reflection. The flames had disfigured his once handsome face and a large scar crept down across one eye. He let a tear trickle down his face. He would never be the same. Life would never be the same. He had lost not only his family and home, but he had also lost his beauty. He turned from the water. He had to get to his fathers friend, he could help him.
The Revenge Of Anduinor-Chapter 2
Chapter 2 Anduinor breathes heavily and his body aches with hunger and dehydration. He had thought he was close to the village.It was only five miles away from his own which now stood as a pile of ash. some how it had taken longer to reach the vilage than normal. he stoped and looked up at the sky. Night would soon come. He could do nothing now. It was dangerous to walk abroad at night. There where things in this forest that he would prefer not to bump into. He walked on for a while longer until he came to a cave. He peered inside. Nothing there, he thought. He went inside and started a fire. ***************************************************************** It was late. But he could not sleep. He thought of his family. His friends. His home. All dead. He forced himself not to cry. It was useless to cry. Crying could not bring them back. Nothing could bring them back. Anger weld up within him. How could those people burn down a village and slaughter everyone in it? How couold someone be so cruel? They had no gold, no jewels,nothing whatsoever of value. so,why? he shook his head trying to empty the thoughts. He could not sleep with his mind so full of problems. He laid down on the hard cave floor and starred at the flickering fire. tomorrow he would reach the village. he would ask his fathers friend Doron to put him up until he was ready to search for his family's murderers. Doron was the best swordsman Anduinor had ever met. He could teach Anduinor to use a sword. Anduinor would avenge his family. He closed his eyes and finally slept.
The Revenge of Anduinor- By Ashley Robinson
Chapter 1. Destruction The sky gives off a black smoke it seams. the air becomes thick and it is dificult to breath. But in truth it is not the sky giving off the fumes, but a valley on fire.It was not accidental that this has taken place, but the work of those who wish the destruction of a small village set in the valley. Those who wish it are unspoken. It is unclear to all who it is that has caused this destruction in a peaceful place.These thoughts and more all but escaped the mind of one who survived.His hands burning from the fire. Lungs heavy from the smoke, he runs for safety in a nearby forest. He heaves himself up the large hill that stands in his way. Then, making sure he was not seen by the raiders, he dashes into the forest. The raiders, thinking their work was complete and that none could have possibly survived the blaze, return to their hidden home in the distant mountains. The survivor,Anduinor, passes out from his pain and sleeps by a stream through the night. When morning comes, he attempts to wash his wounds. Seeing his scarred complection, he strikes the water and weeps. He determines he will avenge the life of his family killed in the devestating fire.
cloudyatmosphere
my only friend! yay =P that legolas picture is amazing
i have to say
posted Oct 06
cloudyatmosphere
wow you have amazing music taste ^^! aand lord of the
rings is seww amazing. God bless!
posted Oct 03
StellarDucky10
Hey........I am commenting. On what, I do not know for
it seems they have not been clear on the subject.
posted Aug 08