Posted February 3, 2009
The pale blue midnight was reflecting off of her decietful yet beautiful face, shining like a spider web her hair is twisted and shining black, under the willow tree first kiss we lie on our backs. Pressure is rising and our eyes are closed the tears flow like an broken waterfall, we wait for the attack, you know they will take me away so lets make these last few moments last, this is the last time your exquisite silver eyes will reflect from mine, you do the math, i am a dreamer and you are my dreams, where did you go its getting so cold? hold my hand tight and indulge with the quiet whispers of tonight, i long for you and my heart is seven shades of blue. Im about to snap here they come parading like death over the barren hills there guns are glinting loaded with intent to kill, you can still make it out just take these last few pills.The silence of your once warm touch erodes but i still feel your presence, my world is tattered and torn but at least the angels dont have to see. a sudden two shots to the head but it was the final shot to the heart that got me dead. the crimson tide is now no one can save me now im not alone and they might take me now, the voice of your thougts flows down the grass staining the mushrooms and the rocks that it may pass. we left our mark and i lie waiting with the rose i planted for you above my lifeless body the pulse has flatlined and your synchronizing beat is dud, babe they got us good it was our last stand, things just slipped away and turned out how we never said they should...
Mr.Tibbs.
wow...i mean every one before me have already stated
the obvious on your mad skills..kudos and keep it
up...you really know how to draw someone in..beautiful
posted May 13
megann_mariee
amazingg
posted Apr 14
♥xXLeciaxLuxuriousXx♥
write more.. This is like a book that I can't get
enough of.. Ive already read it like three times.. and
it just sends chills everytime.. You are an amazing
writer!! =)
posted Apr 06
julierawr
this is super amazing
posted Apr 01
Billi
You're writing is amazing. The way you weave your words
to paint a picture for the world to see; so feirce,
filled with raw emotion without restraint. Ineffible.
posted Mar 21
abby abberant ♫
you posted this on my birthdayy. (: it's amazing.
posted Mar 19
shelbyRENE
that's wicked impressive...that's beyond good. :)
posted Feb 06
KAT
wow this is incredible. seriously.. im speechless. u r
an amazing writer it gave me chills jus reading it
posted Feb 05