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I don’t want this to be like a still shot, a lifeless painting

I want it to move like eloquent dancing, never ceasing, as one being

An eternal moment of passion and beauty, of romance so soothing

Showing me how real this love can be

I let down my guard in Trust as You sweep me off my feet like a gust of wind, portraying just inch, of Your endless goodness that motivates my will to live and to give til I have nothing left inside

Then I hunger for You all over again like a trippy dream made for You and me

Throw in some whipped cream and a cherry, but let me sleep this dream into reality

Pull away my urge to push

Watch me move to slow-mo and delay the rush

I’ll stop to smell the roses You planted for me

And give You the thanks for creating me as me

For giving me beauty I was too blind to see…but now see

That I was created for You and You smile down on me

This heart rejoices in You and I am left on bended knee

To reach up and touch a place I thought was too good for me

I brace to catch Your eyes looking into mine

I cry to think You would take the time to polish this rusty dime as You walk on streets of gold

I am only a spec on the canvas as the story goes

But You created every letter to help the story unfold

A mountain would be a fairy-tale without the molecules to make it real

Without a vision I cannot see what You have in store for me

I wonder aimlessly thinking I have to receive to achieve

But if I gave all I have to only believe, I would see what a blind man can see

Posted Dec 12, 2010 at 12:32pm

Comments (5)

  • Vikkiiiii♥ said:
    Loveee Jan 06
  • †DarlingDead† said:
    o_________o Beautiful. Amazing. Took my breath away. :} Dec 23
  • Madeline Rayne said:
    like! Dec 19
  • Rose =] said:
    Wowwwww!!! soooo good! i wish I could write like you do =) Dec 13
  • caleigh morgan said:
    this is wonderful, as always, i love it. (: i really like where this poem came from, it shows your passion and that really intrigues me. "For giving me beauty I was too blind to see" "I would see what a blind man can see" WOW. Dec 12
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